Unit 19: Learning aim C - Script

Draft script

Feedback Sheets 

Feedback resolution

These feedback sheets helped me to improve my script by first. writing more into the story so that I could have more depth and backstory. Then I should've add more Character voices, development and characteristics. The reread to check any grammatical errors and punctuation problems. Then I added more dialogue so that my script could be more fleshes out. And I extended the story so I could more clearly show who my target audience was.

Final script